
Today, you’re twelve teeth old,
and we fossick for shells,
star-fish, pipi and paua
until the tide goes out
when we wave goodbye
to yachts moored in the marina.
At home, you float
across polished floors
until you keel over.
Your jaw leaves an alveolus
in the matai deep enough
for a tear-drop’s caress.
As I stroke you,
your eyes collect water;
your gums are an ocean of blood.
But only when you’re sleeping,
do I discover a tooth
anchored to blue woollen blanket.
Suddenly, you’re eleven teeth old
and have grown, like Lazarus,
younger beneath moonlight.
White and hull-shaped,
tooth’s a boat,
isolated by low tide.
In the morning,
I’ll show you how it can rest
safely upon its starboard.


Last Thursday I went along to the offices of Steele Roberts for the Wellington launch of Lost Relatives. (She also launched it in Auckland, where she lives.) I wasn't surprised to find a bunch of other writers there, because Siobhan has a knack of making connections with people - not in a 'networking' sort of way, but in a genuine connection sort of way - and has made friends (found family) all over the country. Roger Steele began, Harry Ricketts launched the book, and then Siobhan spoke and did an excellent reading of some of the poems in the book.
I've chosen 'Tooth' as my Tuesday poem because it was one of the poems she read, and I was particularly struck by it - by its simplicity - a story of her son falling and losing a tooth - which belies its intricateness. I love especially the marine metaphors - 'keel over', 'your gums are an ocean of blood', discovering the tooth 'anchored' to the blanket, the tooth 'isolated by low tide'. I also really liked the idea of her son being 'twelve teeth old', and then going back in time to being only eleven teeth old. He was at the launch, and is now six (I think), so many more than eleven teeth old - but still has the gap where the tooth once was.
As always, check out the other Tuesday poems via the Tuesday Poems blog: http://tuesdaypoem.blogspot.com/.
3 comments:
Thank you for this poem which I've been thinking about ever since I read it yesterday. Apparently simple, but not at all simple. Good to find out more about Siobhan whom I've met only briefly - I hope her poetry collection does well.
That's a lovely poem and a great introduction to Siobhan's poetry. Thanks, Helen!
This poem is a favourite of mine. I was so disappointed that the Christchurch launch of "Lost Relatives" had to be postponed until later in the year, but am very much looking forward to reading the collection.
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