tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2836883051275395430.post5199079918357310954..comments2023-05-07T23:04:41.733+12:00Comments on Winged Ink: Tuesday Poem: '4 March'Helen Rickerbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10652318704387476082noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2836883051275395430.post-10359690799979135192013-03-07T15:54:30.394+13:002013-03-07T15:54:30.394+13:00Nice - love the spontenaiety and open endedness of...Nice - love the spontenaiety and open endedness of this one. AJ Ponderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625252892255925438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2836883051275395430.post-81670473405083812592013-03-05T15:05:40.099+13:002013-03-05T15:05:40.099+13:00I'm curious about this "I" and reali...I'm curious about this "I" and realize the poem's not yet finished. Who is the "I" -- is it the trembling man? Is it a narrator? Is it you? One of the pigeons dodging an incoming breadcrumb? Would be interested to see where this poem takes you.Zireauxhttp://www.immortalmuse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2836883051275395430.post-23656625892790891932013-03-04T21:52:32.517+13:002013-03-04T21:52:32.517+13:00I like it!I like it!Emmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16717601470424053243noreply@blogger.com